Brianna E. Garcia Learning Portfolio

Grant Proposal: Funding for Chinese Dual Language Immersion (DLI) Summer Cultural Exchange

Xiao Li

Review

This grant proposal for funding a Chinese Dual Language Immersion (DLI) Summer Cultural Exchange emphasizing the importance of real-world immersion in language learning. The request for $33,000 is justified. It would give any students who might have financial barriers access to this kind of experience. This proposal effectively highlights the benefits of cultural immersion, including improved language skills, greater confidence, and a deeper understanding of Chinese culture. The structured timeline and sustainability plan show thoughtful preparation and a long-term commitment to keeping this opportunity available for future students.​

Although this proposal is well-organized, a more detailed breakdown of the budget would strengthen it further. The request primarily focuses on airfare, but it would help to clarify whether additional costs will be covered by the grant or by the families. Focusing on how the program will handle airfare fluctuations would also provide funders with a greater understanding in any financial planning. More transparency in the budget would make the proposal feel more well-prepared.​

A final consideration is the evaluation process. It should also be expanded. While student reflections and teacher feedback are valuable, including more measurable outcomes would help demonstrate the program’s impact in students lives. The participant selection process could also use more clarification. The proposal mentions prioritizing students with need, but it would be helpful to specify what factors will be considered when thinking about what students those would be. A clear selection process would ensure fairness and equity in choosing participants.​

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Grant Proposal: Enhancing Healthcare Education Through Advanced Medical Simulation

Danielle Opp

Review

Your grant proposal is written well. It explains how the medical simulation lab will improve healthcare education. It does a great job showing why simulation-based training is important and how it helps students gain real-world skills. The proposal includes details about new technology, such as VR/AR modules that will make training more effective. The budget is justified, and the evaluation plan is  easy to read. The plan to work with local hospitals and clinics is also a great idea because it should help students gain experience.

Some areas do need improvement to make the proposal stronger. The proposal doesn't mention how many students will benefit from the new lab. By adding this information, funders could understand the program’s impact and support. The Implementation Plan and Budget Narrative sections could also be formatted better to make them easier to read. A more detailed timeline with specific start and completion dates for activities will also make the plan clearer. Checking how your site is formatted as well will make this an easier read as well. Making these changes will improve your chances of getting funding and ensure the program has a bigger impact on those looking to fund your program.